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SA I Jasper I Maker [Permanent Retirement]

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Date Accepted: 8/10/17

Last Edit: 1/31/18
-Temp Retiring to let a very special fish captain in the spotlight

Roleplay: SEMI-OPEN
Plotting: OPEN


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Jasper

Briem| Maker

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"The finest steel has to go through the hottest fire."


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 ~ General ~

Name: Jasper
Nicknames: Jaz for friends

Age: 
36 years
Gender: Male
Orientation: Homosexual

Herd Affiliation: Briem
Rank: Maker (Metalworker)

Patron God(s): Argus, Alya, Kaia (Respects Ignacio and his flames, but does not worship or pray to him)

First Talent: Artisan (Metalworking) [ LOCKED ]
Second Talent: Gem Master [ LOCKED ]
First Blessing: [ LOCKED ]
Second Blessing: [ LOCKED ]

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~ Appearance ~


Detailed Description:

Jasper has a deep chocolate liver chestnut base with a flaxen mane and tail. About halfway down his mane, it fades slightly. However his tail gets oddly darker in comparison. Here and there, there are birdcatcher spots, 2 of which modify his mane to form white strands. On his left shoulder, hidden behind his wings, the birdcatcher spots form a heart shape. He has a full blaze on his face with varying white coverage on all his legs. Jasper’s wings are a combination of chocolate browns and orange accents.

Species: Pegasus
Build: Morab x Hackney
Color: Flaxen Liver Chestnut Splash with Birdcatcher Spots
Height: 15.2 hh

Weapons: Sword x1 [ LOCKED ]
Scars/Injuries: None
Accessories:
  • None as of yet...
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~ Personality ~


Positive: Principled | Caring| Selfless
Neutral: Stern | Organized | Neutral
Negative: Harsh | Mystical | Private

Jasper is an interesting character, to say the least. He comes off as the dad type, but has no children of his own. His students supplement that though once in a while they find it kind of annoying, just like a normal dad would be. Since his followers come from all over Breim, and some are even Outsiders (he doesn't discriminate, his parents were Outsiders so he knows the feeling), he tends to take on a fatherly figure with them. He always thinks of them instead of himself, their troubles are more important than his own. Most days, when something needs to be repaired, if it's a decision of his things or their things, it will always be their things to be fixed first. Their feelings come first and he's there for support should they ask for it. Once in a while he'll get his hands on a trouble maker and make sure they are taught what they need to know, from a real father if they didn't have any to teach them, or their father wasn't a very good one. 

He also doesn't take any crap. You try to lie your way out of a situation, because of his fatherly nature, he'll know. He spends innumerable hours with his closest followers, which makes him pretty good at spotting out the quickly sown lies like "who broke this?" or "why is this dirty?". The second he asks the question, he's able to figure out who did it unless they have really good poker-face skills. It must be fatherly intuition, that's all.

Jasper isn't usually a mean person, but when you need it, he'll give you the kick in the ass that you need. There is no reason why you should be moping over some stupid thing in the past now, or staying away from your crush because you think you'll mess it up. Just go do it, and if you don't, he'll make sure it's done. He doesn't sugar-coat bad news because what's the point? Bad news is bad news, no matter what way you put it. You can't change the fact that your family member died, it's only how you go about after hearing the news that matters.

Because of his position as a Maker, paired with his introverted self, he tends to come off as private and "mystical" with others. Not to mention his status as a pegasus, he's downright a mystery to most equine.


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~ History ~


Summary:

Words words words


Before Birth / Foalhood:

"Born of black wind, fire, and steel."

Jasper’s mother and father were a kind folk, though not originally born as Breimians. My father was the pegasi of the family, having originated from Serora. Mother was a farmer from War-Forged turned Vagabond, turning from her family to become a Bard. Her voice was one of the few things that could put me to sleep at night, lullabies made of velvet spinning tales of stars close enough to touch. 

They met when mother was passing by in Serora, my father captivated by her voice like every other equine that heard it. However, she took to his quirky ways and they were eventually wed. At that time, she was not ready to settle down in a house quite yet, so they decided to wander for a few years. Father left his family, a promise to return on his lips and then he was gone into the wind with his love. 

After wandering for a few years, they settled down in Breim, finding the rolling hills and grassy plains above the tunnels to be whimsical, almost freeing to the pair. Father had acquired mother’s love of travel, but he wanted to make a family. And having a child when your traveling is never good. So, they settled down and soon after I was born. The elation was short lived however as news from mother’s homeland, of a war between the clans, dampened the mood.

Mother wanted to return, to help her family, fight for her clan, but father reminded her that she left, and now had me to take care of. So, she stayed, but she worried for her family back in her homeland, hoping they would be alright.


Adolescent:

"You can't use up creativity. The more you use, the more you have."

I grew up working the farm with my parents, living in a small community that supplied food for the capital of Breim. I’d never been in the tunnels at this point, but I had seen the entrances. The one closest to my family’s farm was beautiful, carved with delicate swirls and designs, the stone manipulated to look like flowers so detailed if you touched them, they would feel real. That’s what brought me to the world of visual art. Specifically, designing. See, I’ve always loved the stories of old, the heroes with their swords defending against evil. But, mother never talked about what the swords looked like. Were they encrusted with gems? Or maybe decorated with color and engravings? She didn’t know, or at least never told me.

So when I could figure out how to hold a pencil, I started drawing those swords. Each one unique and based off of my favorite heroes. Soon I had all of my favorites drawn up, but I guess I didn’t stop there because I started drawing the villain’s weapons too. And then I made my own. And armor I reckoned, since they now had weapons, they might as well be protected somehow. 

Whenever I had some coin to spare, I would use it on buying cheap paper and pencils, using charcoal from fires to add some shading or color things. Even though I wasn’t the best at drawing, I always had those designs rattling around in my head and I needed them to be on paper so I didn’t forget. Which lead me to when the Master came through town.

I was 16 at the time, having made myself a collection of sketchbooks, each one filled to the brim with sword and armor designs. I think I had around 5 or 6 then, I don’t remember. I have much, much more now.

Anyways, a maker came to town, having been on a trip to Aodh, despite other’s fear of the people who worshiped fire. I learned later he was trying to learn the secrets of Incandescent steel. Cheeky little bugger, I’ll give him that. Our little collection of homes wasn’t large enough to warrant an inn at the time, so when travelers came our way, each family took a turn taking care of travelers, welcoming them into our own homes. Luckily for me, it was our household’s turn to take in the maker.

The maker came into our house and I have to say, he was huge and imposing at the time. Especially to me, since I wasn’t quite as tall as I am now. He was a hulking 17 hands, with a draft build and matching muscles. Mother was in the kitchen, preparing the evening meal while father was finishing up some things in the fields before the sun went to sleep. I was to keep the maker entertained while we waited for them. 

He introduced himself to me as Ryouta, a master of the blacksmithing arts. He wasn’t quite as good as an actual Master, but he still qualified since he was a maker. He also asked how I could work on a farm like this, with all the hard work and still look graceful when I walked. That was a little embarrassing for me at the time, having been a lanky foal when I was younger, now growing into a lighter feminine appearance. I had blushed at the comment, saying that I got the grace from my mother and her light frame.

And while I was distracted with the comment he threw at me, he was already looking through the bookshelf, already landed on my sketchbooks. I stammered, stumbling up to his side, awkwardly trying not to take them from his grip but also not wanting him to see my sketches. Fortunately, it was my lucky day and it turned out Ryouta was looking for a new apprentice, since his last few had either left or not passed the tests laid out for them.

He smiled at me, at my confused panicked face. Ryouta said I had a great many beautiful ideas floating around in my head and he was going to teach me how to make these sketches real steel and stone, something I’d been dreaming about since I’d been sketching. 

It was all up to my parents from there. After the evening meal, I broke the news to my parents, telling them how excited I was to become an apprentice. They were estatic! Their son, an official member of the Breim herd moving farther in the world than they could have ever hoped. Father pulled me aside before bedtime however, wanting to say some parting words before I departed in the morning. He told me that Sterling was just far enough away that they couldn’t visit all the time. I would have to come to them if I wanted to see them. He also said that even if I failed, I was always welcome back home. I didn’t want to fail him though, so I stood and nodded to him, determined to make my parents proud.

So, come morning, my new teacher and I set out for Sterling, the famed city of the New-Generation. It was only a two days journey to the city but I got to see things I’ve never seen before. So many equine, all in one place, each of them clad in brighter colors than the next. There was color and design and just LOUD things everywhere! And I enjoyed all of it, every second of those first few moments when I entered that city. Still, years have gone by, people have changed, but still, that “magic” is lingering for every new soul that enters.

Ryouta lead me to his shop a small but sturdy building, tall and homey. It was painted bright orange, cream, and white colors, a sign hanging outside with an anvil on it and the characters for Ryouta’s name. Clashing flowers in matching pots stood on either side of the doors, waving in the air while we passed through the threshold. It was… odd to say the least. I didn’t expect this large and strong horse living in a building like this, all bright and cheery despite being a metalworker.

The inside was almost as nice, decorated in muted tones like the ones outside, but more homey feeling, lived in. There was a counter, separating the front from the back of the shop. The back had swords and weapons of all matter and size, a huge assortment, some I’ve never seen or heard of before. On the right of the rack, stairs lead up to probably Ryouta’s room and quarters, while the left was a door, leading to the forge. The door had a frosted window set in it, letting a soft red glow in from the flames.

“Your room is up the stairs and to the left. Mine is on the right. Down the hallway is the dining area. You’ll start your training first thing in the morning, so don’t dawdle.”

Ryouta disappeared into the forge then, presumably leaving me to my own devices. Everything was so… new, and overwhelming. I always hoped to have something to strive for, to work for when I was younger, before this opportunity landed on me. I was happy I had found a place that was my passion, a place that would soon become a second home for me.


Young Adult:

"From a little spark may burst a flame."

It wasn’t long before I was in the forge, practicing working with metal while Ryouta took a break. He always rested in the front lounge, watching the people walk by. He always saw the best in people, but also knew that everyone had a dark side as well. That never stopped him from making friends with anyone who wandered into the shop. Even if they weren’t there to buy, they still wanted to talk to this maker. Some makers didn’t like talking to the public, them having some very odd fans who were obsessed with them. Ryouta though loved it. The talking was actually a pastime for him, I learned. He always had a new friend whenever someone left it seemed.

It was one of these friendly visits when I discovered the thing that made my name. Ryouta had set me up with a bunch of metals, telling me to experiment and figure out their breaking points, bending or melting. Basically, just messing around to see what worked and what didn’t. 

I wasn’t supposed to be mixing them, but I got kind of sidetracked. I loved the lightweight feel and moldable nature of Aluminum, but it always broke so easily because it was so soft. Iron and Steel were strong, but heavy and tended to rust over time. There was also this really weird metal, all spiky and dangerous looking, but was almost as soft as the Aluminum. I didn’t know what it was called but it took a whole lot of heat to melt it down into something workable. 

I just kind of threw some Aluminum into the mix with the weird metal, and a little bit of steel for kicks. Turns out, they bonding, making this really cool alloy. It was light and moldable, but didn’t break as easily as the spiky metal or the Aluminum. I set that piece aside, maybe just to keep it or something, but I went ahead and made the same mixture again, this time adding more of the spiky metal and a little bit of black carbon, which tended to make a metal brittle and breakable when hardened. The result was an alloy that acted like a normal metal when heated, but once hardened, shattered not unlike glass. 

It was when I broke that alloy that Ryouta came in. The sound of the cracking must have made him think I broke something important, but that was not the case. “What did you do?” He asked me, standing quizzically in the doorway. He saw the metal shards littered on the ground around the anvil, the hammer still in my teke grip. I must have looked so confused because he laughed at me, causing me to become even more confused. 

“I’m assuming you were experimenting with some alloys I see?” he nudged a shard of metal that was over by his hooves, a questioning look in his eyes. “What metals did you use? I haven’t seen metal behave like this except when it was flash heated.”

I showed him what I did, naming off the spiky metal I was using. It was Magnesium, the stuff used in mining explosions when it had a charge and was ground down into a crystalized powder. I must had had a very concerned face because he reassured me that in this form, it couldn’t do anything besides bend and melt. 

“So, you made two different ones. One that bends like steel but is light as Aluminum, another that shatters once hardened. Interesting. Not what I was hoping for when I set you to this task but I guess good job.”

Ryouta told me I should clean up my mess but while I was doing that, I started thinking of practical applications for these new alloys that I had created. The brittle one was pretty obvious to me. Make arrowheads with them and they would shatter on impact. Pretty darn deadly, but also extremely useful. The other would have to have some experiments done with it. There was sure to be a use for that though. Who didn’t want a sword half the weight of a steel one but just the same amount of strength? Or armor that didn’t weigh its wearer down as much but can still prevent an arrow from striking true?


Adult:

"There is no greater sorrow than to recall happiness in times of misery."

It didn’t take long for word to get out on my “Shrapnel arrows” and my “Feather light” weapons and armor. Soon I was getting offers on buying my recipe. I didn’t want to sell the alloys though, even though I would get thousands of shards from it. Instead, I started offering commissions for them, but not at extremely expensive rates like others. I wanted people that wouldn’t usually get these sorts of new ideas to be able to use them just like any royal or Aodh noble. 

Granted, my alloys were not as famous as Incandescent steel, Aodh’s crowning achievement, but they were still a feat, considering most blacksmiths stuck with what was known, like the Masters in Nariah. I had essentially created two new metal types.

With my growing fame, Ryouta grew older and wished to settle down, live a life in the country. It wasn’t sudden, but I could see him getting more worn down. Some more wrinkles around his eyes, grey hairs starting to show themselves in his mane and tail. It wasn’t a surprise then, when he gifted the shop to me, buying a little farm out near my parents. He’d made another forge there too, not quite ready to quit metalworking altogether. 

I still visit him as much as I can, and since he was close to my parents, them as well. I’m always growing in fame though, getting more and more orders, sometimes even almost too much to handle. But I get the work done, chatting with my customers if they feel to initiate conversation. I don’t have my teacher’s love of talking and socializing, that’s for sure, but I do it for him when they come in and want to talk about the latest things. Makes it almost feel like he is still here, talking away while I worked in the forge.

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~ Other ~


Strengths: 
  • Despite most horses in Breim, Jasper is not afraid of fire and never was. He feels he has a mutual relationship with fire. Don't do stupid things with it and it won't bite back.
  • Surprisingly strong for how limber he looks. Forging metal does that to you.
  • He is good at listening to others, and giving advice on what to do in certain situations. He picked that up from his old teacher, and it just kind of stuck, even though he is somewhat of an introvert.
Weaknesses: 
  • He tends to become distant with strangers, which leaves them thinking he doesn’t like them or whatnot. That usually isn’t the case, it’s usually because something else is bothering him or he is distracted by his thoughts.
  • Since he had been more focused on practicing his craft, his wings aren’t up to par as say, a Pegasus that uses their’s regularly. He is much slower than an average Pegasus in the air, and a little more clumsy, but that doesn’t stop him from flying whenever he can.
Likes:
  • Working in his forge.
  • Designing new weapons/armor. He usually auctions them off to the highest bidder, but he does do some lower grade work for commission or for set sales. His "Feather light" and "Shrapnel" alloys are usually a set price, allowing for lower class citizens to try them out for themselves.
Dislikes:
  • Parties and other political affairs. Also, formal meetings.
  • Strangers who blatantly gawk or praise him for his wings. He does not like to be different in that aspect.
Extra Facts:
  • He braids his mane and tail up when he is working in the forge.
  • Despite his looks, he is in fact, not female. He is very feminine looking which confuses some when they see him from a distance. Yes, if you’ve tried to hit on him, you are not the first.
  • His wings have a slight iridescence to them and they tend to draw the eye with their flash.
  • He does not tolerate drugs or other forms of substances around him, though he doesn't care whether people use them. He only has a problem if they are using it when he is in sight of it. Alcohol is okay as long as it isn't in abundance.
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App art (c) Queerly 
Original Design (c) Flarism 

Featured Art:

[commission] Jasper by Memuii
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LoneWolf0223's avatar
this design is gorgeous